Fiction: Frostbite: A Mafia Family Christmas (pt. 1)

Thanks for reading my very first FridayFlash fiction.  I have been working on a novel called, R-Evolutionary nights and my characters are currently in Prague and Budapest.  The Russian mafia is playing a role and I wondered to myself, What it might be like to go home for Christmas when your family is in the mafia? Here is one such story…

Frostbite:  A Mafia Family Christmas

MafiaI never imagined my first Christmas back home in fifteen years would come to this. Every swear word in my vocabulary started swirling through my head as I grabbed my sixty-two year old mama tightly with both arms and pulled her away from my Great Aunt Urola.

Mama waved her arms wildly, “You never should have come here you old bat! I don’t care what promises were made to Rudolf, he’s dead, but my dying wish is…”

“Mama, shut up and stop this, just look at yourself, it’s Christmas!” I took a hold of Mama even harder and almost picked her up before placing her in the nearest chair. Great Aunt Urola slipped a sly smile towards Mama.

The women in the family were trying to prepare Christmas dinner in the kitchen. They looked up occasionally to make sure the food made it through the latest skirmish. Half of the women were from Great Uncle Ermil’s family. His side of the family was joining us for Christmas for the first time in fifty years. Great Uncle Ermil and my grandfather Rudolf split at that time and never got along. The families have been trying to reconcile since my grandfather Rudolf died three years ago.

My papa, Viktor, heard the fighting from the next room and burst into the kitchen in time to witness another blast from Aunt Urola.   She picked up a huge dish of potatoes and threw the it into the garbage. “What are you doing?” Mama shouted and tried to grab her again. I stopped her just in time. “Tasha!  Stop it!  SHE is the one who needs restraining!”

“I’m not eating ANYTHING prepared by THEM!” Aunt Urola pointed to my great Uncle Ermil’s family.  “You all know what they did.”   She was trembling with rage and stormed into the livingroom.  Everyone in the kitchen followed her.  The relatives in the livingroom halted their conversation and all eyes turned towards her.

Viktor grabbed her arm. “Urola, calm down!  I’ve had enough of your fits!  Every Christmas it’s that same thing!   But this year you are outta control and it’s gonna stop!” My father hated his Aunt Urola, but promised his father, Rudolf, on his death bed that he would take care of her.

“You are just as bad as THEY are, Viktor! Why don’t you be a man and stand up to them for once. You are a disgrace to your father. One of these days you will be sorry.” Aunt Urola wagged her finger at him.

The veins in my Papa’s neck bulged and his face turned a deep shade of red. “You crazy old woman, you sit down and be quiet or I’ll give you something to complain about!” Aunt Urola spun on her heels and returned to the kitchen. The women quickly followed to make sure the food was safe from her rage. The family members in the livingroom poured more drinks and continued their conversations.

I reluctantly returned to the kitchen and collapsed in a chair as Mama continued preparing Christmas dinner with my aunts.  The women ignored Aunt Urola who was standing with her arms crossed in the middle of the kitchen.  She was scowling as she watched the women cooking, ready to pounce at the slightest provocation.

Memories of my childhood and the unusual family gatherings flooded my mind.  Reality can get a little skewed when the family business is running a territory of the Russian mafia and you live on a family compound surrounded by iron gates deep in the Hungarian countryside.   That’s why I eagerly moved to the United States to attend law school and became a criminal trial attorney in Chicago.  If my parents wanted to see me, they came to the States. I insisted they keep me out of the family business.  I never looked back or visited the family in Budapest until now.  I was beginning to think I had made a mistake by returning this year.

Eventually the table was set and Christmas dinner was served. The men were making toasts to the reunion of the two families. Some of the women were shooting icy stares at Aunt Urola. The cousins were diverting their attention by talking amongst themselves and occupying their children.   Aunt Urola ate like a pig.   Then she began inserting criticisms into every conversation.  The tension began growing again.  Most of the family got up as dessert was served and dispersed throughout the house for the evening.

Several hours later, we could hear the icy winds blow viciously through the hills making travel impossible.   My parent’s huge mansion had to accommodate the entire family for the night.  After several arguments about sleeping arrangements, everyone retired.  The house trembled and the windows rattled.  I could feel the draft of bone chilling cold.   Sleep was difficult with the howling wind continually transforming into startlingly gruesome noises.

When morning finally arrived, I groggily went downstairs to find that almost everyone was already awake and eating breakfast by seven o’clock.  My cousins were serving breakfast to their children. The mood was lighter and almost “normal.”  Mama was in a cheery mood.   “What would you like for breakfast?” She smiled at me and touched my arm.

Both sides of the family were getting along splendidly this morning.  My aunt’s laughed as they drank their coffee together.   Relief entered my body as I watched this heart-warming scene.   One of my cousin’s young children looked out the window and said excitedly, “I want to go out and play in the snow with Aunt Urola!”  The other children jumped and shouted to join in.

“O.K., but just for a little while.” My mom smiled and helped put on their snow clothes.

I sighed and thought now nice it was that the children were going to play with Aunt Urola.  That would certainly melt her heart.  The magic of Christmas cheer can turn any grumble bumble around.

As the children opened the door and happily bounded into the newly fallen snow, I couldn’t help but feel their excitement.  But my face dropped and my mouth gaped open when I saw Great Aunt Urola’s hat and two shoes poking out of the snow.  Her body was laying in a snowbank as stiff and frozen as a Popsicle.

Continue reading with Part 2

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42 responses to “Fiction: Frostbite: A Mafia Family Christmas (pt. 1)”

  1. […] 1)      I am the true boss of Anne Tyler Lord’s Russian Mafia […]

  2. Good old Aunt Urola is sure a lot easier to get along with now! Gather ’round, children – ha ha.

    1. Hi Donna,

      Thanks for stopping by! I’m so happy to be a part of, The Penny Dreadful crowd and look forward to reading your mysteries as soon as I get my posts edited and up on there!

  3. […] a twisted little Christmas tale if your family is driving your crazy. And be sure to check out Part 3, which includes ‘Twas […]

  4. Good story. Looking forward to the fallout in part 2. Personally I think she got what was coming to her, but I guess we’ll also see that as the story continues.

    1. Hi Eric,
      LOL! It is really interesting to see how everyone feel about Aunt Urola. I think a lot depends on our past family history. Some of us have similar family members.

      Jake,
      It’s fine, you’re not a dope. I don’t see how everyone in FridayFlash gets all the reading done!

  5. I’m a dope — I looked past the title to see where the text started, and then didn’t go back and read the title.

  6. Anne, nice work!

    Something to consider: We’re over halfway through a story of family dynamics before we find out about the “family business” — something which could be a hook if it were known earlier on, and something that was a little jarring for me when I first read it.

    Enjoy!
    Jake

    1. Anne

      Jake,
      Thanks for your feedback. Hmmm…something interesting to consider. Just have to go by the title the way it is.
      Thanks!

  7. This brought back memories of my childhood family gatherings too. I can remember the yelling matches, the slurred insults and punches thrown. All the same elements of “family unity” without the money and mansion. *Sigh*

    Well written, nice job. 🙂

    1. Anne

      Hi J.,
      Thanks! Nice to hear from you. Are we from the same family? Well, mine wasn’t that bad, all passive aggressive stuff by certain individuals who would have dreamed of acting out. But, looking at your name, it made me wonder?

  8. Oh, I just read this is an excerpt of your novel – wonderful! Also, sorry about the first incomprehensible sentence on my comment above. It is meant to read, “such characterization and the way you made me care about the characters takes skill.”

    (sunday brain) 😉

    I so enjoyed this!

    1. Anne

      Jodi,
      Thanks for your kind comments. I’m glad you enjoyed it! I can see we both love twisted Christmas stories. I love your Grinch story!

  9. Wow, such characterizsation and they way you made me care about the characters. Such skill! I love the whole story line and think I could read a whole book with these characters. I look forward to finding out about poor Aunt Urola.

  10. Somehow Aunt Urola was wearing long striped socks in that snowbank in my mind’s eye… :0)
    Welcome to fridayflash!
    Hope you come back again and again, we have a lot of fun.
    Karen :0)

    1. Anne

      I just about bought my daughter a pair like that last weekend! I plan to come back! You guys know how to party!!

  11. gripping piece. well written, welcome to fridayflash.

    1. Anne

      David and Michelle,

      Thanks for the comments! All of you from the #fridayflash group have really made this a great experience for me. And, I have greatly enjoyed reading everyone else’s flash!!

      Anne

  12. Families can be difficult enough to contend with even when they’re not in the Russian mafia…

    Like Marisa, I enjoyed the opening paragraph.

    Welcome to #fridayflash!

  13. Hey Anne, welcome to Fridayflash! You created a great world in this piece! I thought there was a little too much exposition in the para starting with ‘Memories of my childhood…’ – I felt it dragged on an otherwise excellently paced piece of flash. Now, tell us who topped Aunt Urola! Will be back next week to find out 🙂

    1. Anne

      Thanks for feedback, Lorraine!

      I agree. I was just reading a blog about how to write flash fiction (which I have never done until now) and realized several things I need to change – memories, passive voice…
      I appreciate the help of all you who are experienced flash fiction writers!

      Anne

  14. Highly entertaining read Anne! What a great cast of characters. I look forward to more.
    Welcome to #fridayflash!

    1. Anne

      Thanks Deanna – every comment from my new #fridayflash bunch has been like Christmas coming early!!

  15. Darn, I kind of liked Aunt Urola. She had spunk. Kind of knew what was coming, what with the title and all, but still thoroughly enjoyed it.

    Welcome to #fridayflash.
    ~jon

    1. Anne

      Jon,
      love your comment! She did have spunk, it would have been fun to see what else she was going to do. But what can you do with a family like this. I certainly have no control over them!

  16. Very atmorspheric and most appropiate as Im about to start preparing Kotlety.

    Welcome to friday flash

    1. Anne

      Thanks for comment! I’m so glad to be part of Friday flash! I had to look up what Kotlety was and found this:

      KOTLETY (RUSSIAN MEATBALLS)
      1 lb. chopped beef
      1/4 lb. chopped veal
      1/4 lb. chopped pork
      6 slices white bread, remove crust
      1 beaten egg
      Salt and pepper to taste
      2 med. finely sliced onions
      1 can mushrooms, finely sliced
      1 clove fresh garlic, mashed fine (can use juice)
      2 tbsp. fresh chopped dill, if available
      (Soak in water with milk added until moist through).
      Mix well. Do not squeeze water from bread. Form into 16 to 18 balls. Flatten ball into oblong shape with knife. Pat entire shape with fine bread or cracker crumbs, not too heavy. Fry in large skillet in butter until well browned. Done when white juice runs out when pressed lightly with fork. Do not press. Serve with kasha, rice or French fried potatoes, spinach as a vegetable and garnish with fresh tomato quarters.

      I don’t know if this is similar to your recipe. It seems all families have their special meatball recipe. We have Swedish meatballs. This recipe has a few different things. The meatballs get shaped into rectangles? oblong shapes? And, I assume the white juice running out is from the milk? Never heard of adding milk to the bread.

      But, you have inspired me to add Russian recipes to my novel!

  17. Poor old Aunt Urola. She wasn’t a nice lady, but she sure made for some great reading! I really enjoyed your story and look forward to reading more. ~ Olivia

    1. Anne

      Olivia,

      Thanks for the comment! Yes, it can be a struggle when difficult people die, by whatever means. We can grieve for the “real” people in our lives that die, then play out our twisted dark side with writing.

  18. Bravo . . . Nice story, loved the ending.

    1. Anne

      Thanks Louise,

      It means so much when others read my story!

  19. Brilliant debut, thoroughly enjoyed it! You sucked me right in – the ending was such a surprise.

    Welcome to #fridayflash, I’m looking forward to your next installment.

    1. Anne

      Sam,
      Thanks for your comments! And, thanks for helping me get hooked up with #fridayflash. Now you get better and write some more cat stories!

  20. Wait, you’re writing a novel about the Russian Mafia and graphics of guns scared you? LOL

    Marc

    1. Anne

      LOL! Yeah, I have absolutely NO idea how the Russian mafia got involved with my family of characters. They appeared from no where and now they won’t leave. They keep causing all kinds of problems.

  21. Anne

    Marc, I am not experienced with gangster stuff, and yes, I think a more powerful gun is called for! When I looked through the graphics under the topic of mafia, most of them scared me! hehe!

    Laura, I’m afraid I took out some old family business of my own on her;))

    Mazzz – Ha! I agree, what fun for the kids to use as snowball target practice!

  22. Oh dear, Aunt Urola might wish she had been a little more pleasant!
    A dead body makes a great toy for kids though, I’m sure I’d have loved one at that age!

  23. What a wonderful way to get rid of the old battleaxe. 🙂
    Welcome to #fridayflash!

  24. Hi Anne, I’ve been following your trailers to this story all week and you certainly delivered. Good stuff. And a good job in trailing it and whetting my appetite.

    As a fellow novelist of things gangster, may I humbly suggest you need a more menacing (and indiscriminate) gun in your Russian Flag emblem? A semi-automatic might fit the bill.

    I look forward to the next installment (of your story that is, not some extortion payment!).

    Bests

    marc

  25. Anne

    Thanks Marisa,

    Great to hear from you. I was inspired by my novel, but also by my own family gatherings of 1970’s. It was a little dicey in those years;))

    This #fridayflash thing is fun, glad to join in!

  26. Great first paragraph, Anne!

    Oh those difficult family dynamics, whether one is a member of the Russian mafia or not, especially around the holidays, heh.

    Last paragraph did bring the gasps.

    Intriguing people…and wonderful story.

    Welcome to #fridayflash!

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